All Comments on 'Snow Shoveling'

I enjoyed this one very much. It's great to see you post stories again.

5 *'s

Simply wonderful. I agree with Tarheels_fan, 5 stars.

Bravo!

Great attention to detail. It seemed like I was there and had me wishing. I hope there are more chapters coming... or cumming!

Loved the story. You got a talent. Looking forward to the next chapter. All the best.

Thank you for making a terrible job a turn on. Great detail I felt like a fly on the wall. Fun wet orgasmic time, who needs the forty dollars.... lol Now that is a very cool MOm... Look forward to more stories

"Suzie asked incredulously"

She isn't the only one. Overwrought fantasy.

By the way who is Andrew? If you can't remember your character's names, why should we?

I usually love your work, but this story became so improbable so quickly, that I couldn't go on.

Then the mom became involved, and broke the suspension of disbelief.

don't pay attention to the non believers. follow this relationship(s) up, please

Look, I have to admit this could have been written better, and could maybe do without the addition of the mother. But otherwise this is fine, not book quality, but fine

I guess I am, classified as a senior citizen and I loved it and I kinda wish that had happened to me when I was in high school.

Post the next chapter soon. Nice story. Ignore the negative feedback.

I love it although at first I was a little turned of from the mother getting involved but she fit perfectly in it so nice story I cant wait to read more

The best!

I disagree with the negative comments, but to some extent I disagree with the positive ones, too. I think Maureen neither ruined the story nor made it hotter. I think she was the mechanism to turn it into a satire. She truly had a comedic effect, and I think it was both intended and effective. I found myself smiling a lot at her running monologue. She definitely knows anatomy and has a honed sense of sexual practice and etiquette. While the events of the story became more and more improbable, Mrs. Askland held it together by wittily imparting her nuggets of wisdom to the sincere and willing but bumbling kids. Well scripted, Storyman!

Where is the next chapter?

I really enjoy all of your stories that I've read. And I can really see a multiple chapter series starring these 4 characters. Please do!

I liked it..it pleased me ! Well written and erotic more than crude so thanks. Scotty/slowrdr@aol.com

A great story, well written and the intergenerational involvement of the mother made it interesting and hot.

Had to let my dinner get cold as I couldn't stop reading story until I had finished it.

Great story but it will need more chapters ?

MEDIC, relief needed in master bedroom

I really hope you will develop this storyline further. Loved the story and think it could be continued so easily.

This is the best "instructional" story I've ever read. At the right level, not to baby-ish and not to intellectual, and very hot. The "two girls and a mom" may have a thing or two to do with the hotness, of course :-)

Just a great story, would love to see more.😁

Great story: Thank you! It “two-upped” one of my favorite fantasies from the days when I was shoveling snow for the neighbors. And, Yes, some light editing will be good. Remove “Andrew” and change “click” to “clique”.

And while I've never shoveled snow (thank God!) it sure is lots of fun to curl up with the girlfriend and fall asleep with her in your arms. And if you happen to wake up first, slowly caress her breasts and fondle her erect nipples as she slowly wakes up...

Great educational piece....

You out did yourself with this one. I'm not just blowing smoke your writing is AMAZING.

Loved when he slipped her kickers down 'blonde curls matching hair on her head' appeared...not a fan of bald pudendas-looking like pre-pubescent girl

and Maureen right...real men will always go down after blowing load of spunk...if she's gonna swallow his load only fair...say if she hasn't gotten off yet...just needs a couple of licks...to the MOON! ...and she'll know you're a keeper....

Fantastic story! Thanks for sharing it with us :<))

never happened to me....guess i am on the wrong planet or something lol

Where is part 2, 3 and 4??? This storyline had SO much potential!