All Comments on 'Snowbunny'

Where is the story?

Not bloody likely.

My wife became obsessed with simultaneous orgasms for a while, years ago. It's like being a trapeze artist or something.

I, as a hetero male, don't really like it. I'd rather lick her until she screams, and then ride that mare until the neighbours call the police.

It's a start of an interesting story but it didn't get there. This is why you must find an editor. The story so far is merely the setup for a real story. Write down a bunch of story ideas and find someone to help you turn one of those ideas into a real story.

The story goes that Lionel Richie took his songs to Quincy Jones. Quincy jones took a look at the songs and sent him away to write 100 new songs. It takes practice.