All Comments on 'Snowed In'

You lost me halfway... I love erotic horror but this was way... tooo long... Maybe you should have broken it up into parts.

This was a little bit out there. Incest/horror/nonhuman=WTF? Some long legged creature wrapping around the face with an appendage? I love a good horror story, but it just was missing something. Almost like after the sex, the horror of it all ended too fast.

was a good read. was pretty creepy and out there though. would like to see more work from you. Nice job

I started out with the "Sex or Suicide" series... Moved on to the "Teardrop Tonya" series... Then read "Sideshow Sylvie"... And now "Snowed in"... I must say you've quickly became one of my favorite authors to read. Your story telling ability is superb sir. Whether it's fun story telling like sex or suicide and teardrop tonya or creating a horrifying backdrop for your stories like sylvie and snowed in. All masterfully told. Usually after 3 pages, a literotica story loses its momentum... Not your stories. Very well done sir. Please continue weaving masterpieces.

Best regards,

Sean

Kinda sucks that everybody dies, but great read.

This feels like an erotic coupling story with its romantic ending cropped out and copy and paste a random horror story from someone else. The horror element felt so painfully out of place and forced it's ridiculous.

This work is absolutely no way near as good as Sideshow Sylvie which was a very good blend of mystery, suspense, horror sex (zombie girl was so fucking hot AND scary) cuminated in a shocking ending that's very in tone and consistent with the whole story.

This piece has none of the above, i think the worst part was where she was freaked out by the ghost and then suddenly have incestuous sex with her bro as if nothing have happened. I almost stopped reading there but out of my respect for your previous work I finished it anyway.

I'm sorry if you are offended by my view but make no mistake I'm 100% sincere and still looking forward for your next story

... in that it was incest and multiple forms of horror. The son and his parents had lived there for a while with no strange shit happening, but as soon as the step-sister gets there, all hell breaks loose? No warnings at all, either. Was it ghosts? Aliens? Both? Some giant preying mantis? Author, I have to give you one star for the disjointed story. I have enjoyed your other works some, but this was just a mess.

I loved the story. I just wish the monster were explained a bit more. Other than that,I thought the sex scene was hot and the horror had me on edge.

Very compelling. I'm not sure why some of the other commentators apparently didn't get what was going on. I enjoyed both the romance and the horror aspects. I thought incorporating the creature was a good touch, since I'm not a huge fan of straight ghost stories.

The ending was a bummer. I was hoping that Chris would wake up the next morning and it was all a dream. Or that the Thing had entered Jamie, wanted some and gave here the fuck of her life or made her its slave, or something. Maybe impregnated her? Should have included a part when the parents returned home to find: either horroer scene or that everything was normal.

An interesting story, though it does seem strange that the monster was apparently living peacefully in the house for years without attacking Chris and Jaime's family, and yet the moment they decide to have sex, it suddenly attacks them. Also, the introduction of the ghost of a previous victim all of a sudden seemed a bit rushed. All in all, the erotic parts of the story were nice, but the supernatural elements could have been established better beforehand, so that they would feel less tacked on.

This creature is a beast that feeds upon the flesh of those who commit sins of the flesh. The woman was brutally killed for her acts of adultery. The parents weren't attacked because they're married. Chris & Jaime were killed because they didn't heed the warning and gave into their lust and did that incest thing.

Magnificently constructed as well as told, the author not only shows real talent for writing both erotic and horror fiction, but actually doing both in the same story. Fantastic.

It would have been truly perfect if they killed that thing from the attic and lived happy. or u could have gone with they killed it and ran to the hospital and when someone came home they found it and that one person that went to jail befor got released and whatnot. i think that would be cool. anyway ur storie gave me goose bumps and not many stories do that anymore. email me at

thatcrazyguy101@yahoo.com if u think u wnt to read one of mine. I'm sure it won't be as good as urs but i would love to try.

Wow! I got the chills reading this. Fantastic writing.

The ending had so much more potential. It would have been so much hotter if the monster had raped the sister on screen so to speak, and then A) we got to see her torn apart by it's appendage, B) we got to see her knocked up, or C) it enslaved her

To creepy for me