All Comments on 'Snowed in with SIL'

This was pretty much a copy of the story posted by the same author to day before, just in a different location.

My cousin and I did the same only without the "pot" and we didn't wake up for 8 solid hours .

Not one word of dialog. Just amazing all that happened without a word between them.

My brother travels quite a bit and believes his wife to be helpless. When he's gone he asks me to make sure I help her around the house. We help each other out of our clothes and then help ourselves to each other around the house. I think the only place we haven't helped each other is when she is on-line with the camera going talking to my bro. I intend to have my head between her legs at least one time when she is. Thank goodness for sister-in-laws.

ThIs author makes the classical mistake of telling rather than showing, it's about as immersive as a summary.

you can't lace weed with X.......

You couldn't leave because of the snow, but you had pizza delivered? Did they use snowmobiles to deliver it?

The power was out but they turned on the radio? You’re poor writing list me before the story for to thegood parts

He should have asked for a ride home with the Pizza delivery guy as he clearly could drive in the snow