All Comments on 'Snowed In with the Boss'

It flowed very well, was very erotic, and just the right number of pages for the story.

Sequel?

Gave up near the end of page 1.

Keep it up .

Great story keep it going

Thanks for this great read. Erotic literature is about developing a believable story. You were more than successful. Great story development, excellent character development.

You worked the story well with excellent buildup, and I agree with others that you could have a sequel. I imagine that if there are not any opportunities for Adam and Debbie to have more road trips that their frustration will build. Also, you stated that Amanda is having trouble finding a good man. I would enjoy seeing what you write next.

Need sequel. Not only how their relationship continues but how they convince the boss where the problem/money drain comes from. I like stories that have some plot to them.

I was kind of disappointed the hotel clerk didn't get in on the action. Any chance of a follow up that would include her?

Good reading. The characters did not become a slut or super stud. love to read a sequel.

shouldve hate fucked that bitch in the ass

But you could leave out the overly large tits and over sized dick. I know most stories have those, but it doesn't add anything to the story, but detracts from the realism. Would like to see a sequel. Still gave it a 5

Great read! I was really hoping the desk lady would get involves somehow. I would definitely love a sequel!

You left out the most important part. Was it the HLAI board or the LLMUX card that was causing the problem?

Nice story and thank you for sharing

Would have loved to see you take this in the direction of a secret submissive or perhaps have you bring the main character to the boss' house and do both ladies

Had a boss for a short while that drove me crazy, but unfortunately, never got to fuck her!!

I t happen too me a male I was working for a lady had to drive her home one night it was Friday night it toke five hours when we got there she ask me if I would like to come in for a drink I said yes a cup of coffee good then we went inside the house then we heard that the road is close a tree fell down well I guess I can not get back in town to night I will sleep in the truck do not be silly I have a spare room you can sleep in I just hope you brought some thing to wear in bed I said no miss I just sleep in my under wear no that will knot do it get cold in here I think I can find you some thing to wear if you do not mind wearing a girl nightie I told her a lie just the nightie no sexy panties well I never thought you would wear a nightie I thought you give me a hard time put you want to wear panties too that when I lie again I always want to dress as a girl be some one cuckold bitch she told me then you will be my bitch for the week end and if this work out just maybe we can do this again well that week end I was dress as her little girl and I was told to call her mommy then she start to call me baby girl well mommy had me in a little school girl clothes mommy show me how to wash her clothes by hand then the road was open she told me she be back in a hour then I was told after the wash go shower and you the cream and when mommy come back you be in a towel I did as told it was a hour and mommy was back I sitting in the living room she walk over to me and I got up mommy remove the towel well look at you clean shave and nice too I ask why my body hair gone well girl we do not have body hair now let me get you dress so you are not cold then she ask for the last time you really want to be my girly bitch I said yes please mommy teach me please I do any thing and wear anything you want I know I do knot have girly tits but if you want to put fake breasts on me that will be nice right there she pull out two fake breasts well after that week end I never went back to work as a man but as her office bitch and at night I was her house bitch

Since this story is really the 'taming of the shrew', I see lots of potential for a sequel. How will they work together at work? Will Amanda give up her buddy? What happens if their passion is discovered? Will she succumb to his generosity - can she do without him for +2wks? Will it turn into true love and what she needs to cover the burns of her past life to become a loving wife? I see some interesting writer fun here. KRD

The story was good until the part about the roses, a women like that would not give roses which would be a dead give away. I'm sure there is more coming with this tale.

Great writing. The anonymous comment writing sucked ,but was funny.

Surprised this didn't evolve into a 3 way. And disappointed! :)

Having worked with women who presume that to be effective they have to project a very Draconian persona I can really identify with your story, however what transpired on the road trip was quite unique. You wrote it very well and it seemed that it was autobiographical rather than just rich fiction. Great job!!

This story was great that I would love a sequel, maybe with the boss's lover joining them?

Not that its needed... But its best to have one. Just that they won't be snowed in anymore though

Love this story. Great job with characters and pacing. Super sexy!

Great story. Very nice build up and not just crazy sex in every known position. I would love to hear more about these two.

my late wife was like that a woman in a man's world . worked with her for all most 10 yrs. found her weak spot after 7 yrs . all most 10 yrs later I married her . the difference between day & night. after 27 + yrs she passed away.

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Well written. It was funny, erotic, different and plausible. Not the usual cuckolding story so common here. It has interesting twists and turns. It was a pleasure to read. 5*. Thanks for the story and please keep writing.

This is a very well written and entertaining story. I've enjoyed the plot, characters, and the flow. Made for enjoyable reading. Keep it up

Well crafted and written, with enough detail to fill the 5 pages. Trying to cram it into 1 or 2 pages wouldn't have worked; you caught my interest from the early stages (what a good storywriter should do) and carried it through to the end.

Only trouble is; I want a sequel seeing how they get on through the rest of her contract and afterwards. There's plenty of scope based on the charters in this story. 5 stars.

This definitely requires a part 2

I agree with anonymous and Ravey19.... you definitely need a part 2

yea this needs to go on more to see how they progress and how her girlfriend reacts and what happens at work. loved the story and how it went.

Great job with the build up. You really know how to draw out a tease.

Please write a part 2. Too much unfinished, nd the boss may change her attitude, especially if her name is gonna be mommy!

as others have said, you really need to continue this but like some of your other stories you lay the table then nothing....please please continue for this was really really good

Very enjoyable story. Would love to read the sequel and find out how white on rice comes out. Or is it cums out?

Nice premise.

Good buildup.

Too much loud sex chatter.

Four stars.

Any hope for a sequel?

Well-written story but what happens to them? (I know the note with the flowers may have foreshadowed their future together, but a sequel would be nice.)

If you have a continuation of this story, I would love to know the title. Very well done.

Great attention to detail.

One of if not the best stories I have read on here.

Fun und Funny story!

10/10!!!!!

PLEASE FOLLOW ON

This could really use a second part, at the least.

Such a great story. Complications and background without being in your face. Reasons for behavior brushed on but not done in an *info dump*. And above it all, I love your "grumpy enough to not give a fuck" MMCs. Love reading your stuff.

Erotic and pleasure to read, well down with background and detailed sexually explicit writing. Very enjoyable

Great story!! Lili was an easy skank

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤❤, 👍👍!

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Love the story. Great build up. Be interesting to see where these characters could go in a sequel

This story needs a part 2..

Good romantic story

An excellent imaginative tale, with interest from start to finish.

Part 2????? Would love to see them go ahead and develop playing between work.

Good story but the original 'snowed in with his boss is better

YES, This story needs a part two.... 4.5 stars

A good fun narrative, nicely told. Perhaps a happy-ever-after sequel to follow?

Definitely want a sequel with these 2

Part 2 please. I'm totally hooked. Geez, I really need to get some work done though. Too good to put down

Great fun storey, thanks! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Wish there was a sequel

Fun, interesting, well written story. And put me down for a sequel too.

Nice approach , good story telling I love it , more from this offering

Must admit I'm on the side of the folks that think a sequel would be a good idea! 5*

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