by EdDivers
I’m really enjoying your story can you please continue it
Great start. In the end Griz could take her to his cabin to get away from legal issues and wild sex
When's the next chapter? Are you writing it already? How far are you? How long's it gonna be before you're finished? Can we see some of it so long? He he, just joking, it would be rude to rush you. But seriously, when do you think...
Came back to tell you about how good stories are appreciated around here. They are.
Evebroughtanaxthistime
I don't know if you intended this to have such a heavy element of humor, but if so please keep it up. This woman makes me smile.
This definitely had me thinking of the new movie The Hateful 8, but a little less blood and a little more cock. Pretty pleasing.
I'm currently reading the part where she denies having registered being fucked and just had to come tell you it's possible for one to laugh your ass off. Very sure of it. Going back to read the rest now. Evebroughtanaxthistime
Obviously fictional, more in line with old East Germany. Set up with a totalitarian police state - it's not like the US is the only country with borders.
8' of snow isn't going to collapse every roof. Unless the roof is flat, it's not much of a problem. If those parts were the "unrealistic" parts to you... Sigh.
What fantastic writing. I love a story with fantastic writing, interesting plots and a diverse range of characters. Love love love. Keep it up.