by arachnida
i loved the beginning and cannot wait to read more. very good story building. thank you for sharing your talents!
Glad you're back. Excellent first chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
You have started this story out so well... it's leading up to the second chapter which i can't wait to read...
please hurry up and write it.... i love it so far
Enjoying the story so far, would be great if it were to continue... so here's hoping.
You definitely have a talent for writing. After reading this story, I went looking for the next piece, and was disappointed to find that it's been ten years and there is no more. I hope you are enjoying whatever you are doing now, but if you have a desire to continue this story, it would be enjoyable to many.