All Comments on 'So Completely His Ch. 01'

well written, and almost a frantic pace driving it on. I did not vote as while I admired the writing the main theme made me want to rescue her, so clearly the story evoked a strong reaction, if not that intended. -- UK CYNIC

With stoires like this, you run the gauntlet. Either half-ass it or go all the way. And you create an amzingly depraved, yet unbeliveably erotic story. Allison comes across as both a dasmel in distress and yet amazingly sensual. Honestly the best submisson story I've recently. Hope you continue! I honestly want to see what happens next.

Well written. Very arousing piece. You don't often see the feeder/feedee stories but you did it justice. The dom/sub is in full swing, Micheals intentions to destroy Allison's body were out in the open from the start...needless to say it shall be a fun ride. Do press on!

I have been through something very similiar. I was fattened from 120 to 260 and Im still growing each week. This Dom feeder I met convienced me too and my friends are all shocked on how much I let myself go. I used to tease chubby girls growing up and now its my turn.....payback is bitch!

Please write a part 2 to this it is by far the hottest, most awesome story i have every read,..,.plzzzz continue.

Excellent work! Love the way you integrated body image shame into the humiliation. I'd love to see a second chapter or another similar story.

plzzz make another part i get turned on the same as i when i first read it its gotta be done !!!!!

There has got to be more to this!

Loved the story build up, can't wait for a sequel!

Hubby and I loved this story. I have been gaining weight for hubby and much of this story is alot like our sex play. Would love to read more...

This story really turned me on. Would LOVE to give myself so unconditionally to someone. Oh to be so completely submissive to allow him to do as he wishes. The imagery got me so wet. I hope you continue the story.

extremely well written , the frantic pace , the complete submission of Alison , and the almost crazed michael , combine to create a most remarkable story.

interesting & intriguing to read , i personaly think it works astoundingly well as a D/s fantasy ..

in respects to real life , in my opinion someone demanding a person puts on a grotesque, unhealthy amount of weight .. is not someone who cares for or has the other persons wellbeing at heart at all

and someone willing to become so unhealthily obese , to please someone needs help

because they are not in a D/s relationship .. they are in an abusive relationship.

it's not D/s it's Abuse .. emotional, mental, physical..

anyhow as Fantasy/fiction story .. it merits a 5 star vote ..

as a reflection of real life .... seek help asap.

Please return to this! This story is incredible! Love the humiliation

*This* is the best feedee story I've ever read, it just made me orgasm - thank you for this! Oh, and how I'd wished to be Alison - I'd did everything to get ruined like her. Please continue the story, please!!!