by sensanin
She sure has some misconceptions about vampires and assume quite a bit.
I'm all about the characters having fun but not so much that they are annoying and immature.
The style is humorous and engaging, but dragging the "what am I" interspersed with multiple sex scenes is getting old. Where are you going with this? What is she, or at least how can they find out what is might be? I won't rate this chapter in hopes that the next one advances the story rather than rehashing the same what-am-I garbage.
"What would I get in return?"
"My gratitude and appreciation."
Uhhuh...Now take that to the bank and see what interest they'll want on that loan.