by XXscribbler
Extremely well written. Delightful excursion into whimsy. Well done - keep writing!!
Silly, funny, and wonderfully well-written story. Loved the German sentence structure, and the understanding of at least how some women think, plus the semi-nerddy behavior was spot on. Fun. OTHO, everyone knows it never deluges in Seattle, just like we never get a heavy snow on Christmas Eve. Perhaps that is something you could put in your next story.Great job.
Great tale!
As for Seattle weather...No deluges? Ha!. OK, a cloudburst every so often that drowns rats. I don't know that Seattle received HEAVY snow on Christmas Eve, but much of the region was dusted in white by sun-up. That alone is a Seattle rarity.
But...the boobs...ah, yes we were talking about boobs, the magnificent appendage of a grown woman. Who could resist the delectable charms of a woman, and what scoundrel would intervene in her life to render her less than proud? After all, a woman is a treasure to behold, and she knows it.