All Comments on 'So Night Follows Day Pt. 29'

I have no specific criticisms, just general praise for a well- written story with actual characters. I truly hope this isn't the end of the story.

It's not. One more chapter to go, just submitted it.

If you consider "A Little Night Music" and this one to be a two-part epic, which I do, since I started this immediately after I finished the other; this story has been an 11-month journey, and I thank you for coming along.

I was truly impressed. The plot, the rationals, the characters, presentation, differentiation, thought experiments, everything. A great screenplay.

If I didn’t know better I’d think the author was a psychologist and just happened to have been traumatized at an early age and eventually developed sufficient resources to get it out on paper. No such thing as mind control? Right. And The Myth of Mental Illness. Marsha Stout thanks you.

Thanks. No professional training here.