All Comments on 'So Wrong... But So Right!'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
fantastic

This story was great. It was a bit flip-flopping in the beginning and hard to follow but once you got them to the house it was great! I'd love to read more about these guys...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Spark in the Marriage?

It started out with the two getting into swinging together. Marriage intact, they were in this together. Their 'sponsors' did it this way. It ended with the wife lying to the husband (Not telling him is lying) about taking on the football team, then UNPROTECTED. This should be ending in a great place. She no longer gives a shit about him, just what is between her legs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good story let down by editing details

Metaxa 5 star is a mid-range liqueur, it's not 100% brandy, so it's not" top of the range", as implied. Also there are Christian names inserted for "extra" characters who don't seem to exist! These are examples. Would love to read more but please check that editing!

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