by Cute Little Thing
just wanted to say i would love to be the subject in the story. it really got me hot and hard
The story certainly passed the wet spot test. A couple of points:
1. Characters usually start off bemoaning, then pass to confused then to acquiescent and finally to eager. Your story by abbreviating the first stage considerably veered off from being formulaic. Nice.
2. Some narcissism and mirror poetry in the next issue please?
Oh Fuck, that was one of the best stories i have read on literotica.
please can you write more, lots, lots more.
I would love too read more about Alex
But just keep up the fuckin' fantastic work
THANK YOU
this was okay but Alex got into it way to fast. I never felt like he REALLY didn't want to do it.
Interesting story, though not my personal thing. I read it to see if it got more my style. Interesting graffiti references. :D
I really wish you would have put some kind of warning at the very beginning about this being gay literotica. I almost vommed.