by quite
Your stories are well written but would appreciate a page 2 with a better physical description and maybe a bit more discriptive encounter.
Yeah, I am not going to lie, I am not the best author, but ya know whatever. I will work on it though, thanks for the input. I mean hell, I've written way worse shit than this before.
I think your very good at showing the closeness of the people in your stories. I can almost feel how deep their relationships go. Just my 2 cents.
Mmmmore, please. This was lovely, and passionate, and full of opportunity.