All Comments on 'Sobriety and Celibacy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So Great but too Short

Your stories are well written but would appreciate a page 2 with a better physical description and maybe a bit more discriptive encounter.

quitequiteover 14 years agoAuthor
from the author

Yeah, I am not going to lie, I am not the best author, but ya know whatever. I will work on it though, thanks for the input. I mean hell, I've written way worse shit than this before.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
closeness

I think your very good at showing the closeness of the people in your stories. I can almost feel how deep their relationships go. Just my 2 cents.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More.

Mmmmore, please. This was lovely, and passionate, and full of opportunity.

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