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Anonymousover 12 years agoreally good start cant wait for the next chapter may be it could be a little longer
Anonymousover 12 years agoHOT HOT HOT
MAKE IT HOTTER THE NEXT TIME HAVE THEM TWO TO GET OTHER TEAM MATES TO JOIN IN WITH THEM TO OK
ERock359over 12 years agoGood lead-short finish
The story builds up well enough, but when it comes to the erotic part, it leaves something to be desired. It just seems like a play by play rather than anything stimulating. Each sentence in the last paragraph should be expanded into their own paragraphs showing how the pleasure builds and expands for these to individuals who are finally having the chance to live out their fantasy.
Anonymous7 months agoExpect another chapter to be written but not…. First story was written on Oct 28, 2011…….. what’s going on???
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