by akiss2desire
for her partner. HOW disrespectful can you get. YOU claim to be BI isn't that the fashion these days? Well do youself and you children and your husband and go full time lesbian you care nothing for your husband let him loose to find someone who won't cheat on him, I don't care who or what you are cheating on him with you are a cheat and have no bussiness being married.
And for you information the story was about as erotic as watching paint dry!
wow what a fasnating story. soccer moms need lesbian love too. very erotic love this story. from start to finish.
...that being an undereducated blogger DOES NOT make you a writer! Hell, it doesn't even make you smarter than the average trash collector.
This PATHETIC EXCUSE for a story is filled with poor, poor grammar, ridiculous misspellings, and some of the worst composing of thoughts EVER posted on Literotica.
Stick to your blog, and leave us the hell alone!
can't believe the negative comments on here, thought it was great. keep it up!
... how once again those who flame are seldom equiped with the courage to log on. Can they? I'd appreciate it if Literotica only allowed comments from those who log on. What I liked is your courage to use fragmented dialogue. Stream of consciousness has its place in our literature but is seldom to be seen here. Instead authors go all to often in the other direction.
Keep it up (to coin a phrase)!
R.
I get so erect watching paint dry, when it's presented like this. What sort of a wanker gives only negative feedback [first comment]? You don't have to like everything, but the least you can do is appreciate people's efforts to entertain you. If you think you can do better - well, do so. That's a challenge that I fancy you will not dare to take up. Thank you,akiss - it's fun reading stuff other people offer us. Keep at it, and ignore totally negative flames from envious 'couldn't do it myself' whingers. Freddy.
I do have stories on this site thank you. not that it's any of YOUR bussiness
I found this story to be very interesting and entertaining. Yes, there were spelling and grammatical errors, but the storyline was good. I enjoyed it.
Make this a series of lesbian discoveries, seductions, parties, swapping, etc. Great start to a very successful story.
doesn't matter cant cheat it, its not even human its Bi or lesbo, not even remotely a female in a marriage,hahahaha look at them pretending they have meaning and souls awwwwww.
idol (I believe you meant IDLE), idol is an image or other material object representing a deity to which religious worship is addressed. IDLE is to pass time doing nothing. OR to move, loiter, or saunter aimlessly: