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Hi!

So the first story is done, and i like the response so far. I would really like to see some feedback though. I know I picked an obscure source for my work, but i am committed (or I should be).

anyway the next story is a little more than halfway done, and it involves Ido finding out about Gally's new body. I do intend to bring other known characters into the mix (from the manga) and Hoshin will not return for the forseeable future.

looking forward to hearing what ya think!

lotsa love,

L.L.

got some private feedback, telling me not to give up!

Thanks again, to the sender (I couldn't find your name here to respond personally) and want to say I have no intention of stopping!

I will be giving the next one soon, and it is turning out much better than this one (and I like this one!)

I hope anybody who reads (or rereads) this after now will leave some public comments, as I would love to hear what more people think.

Thanks again, everyone!