by EvilPiggieLord
that was phenomenal. the emotions took hold of me, and i couldn't stop reading for one second. it was bittersweet, but it was so beautiful. i know this will sound strange, but after i came while reading it, i cried too. thank you so much - i think it was the most cathartic orgasm of my life.
I liked it but didn't like how you ended it , in his mind. He thinks that maybe it was first and last time with her? Blah to that--make them lovers forever. Didn't think it was very nice of her to say another man's name while orgasming. Make him desire her and tell her so so that they dont waste time. Hope you write more about them.
I absolutely adore all of your stories and this is no exception. Your descriptiveness is perfectly measured, in such a sexy way of never needing to tell too much so that at the same time as blending in to a beautifully scripted story, you allow me to be there.
I also feel that you allow the reader to be themselves in this story, rather than constantly reinforcing the idea of constant, eternal coupledom. For this, thankyou.