All Comments on 'Soldier Girl'

What a fantastic story. Can hardly believe that I hasn't got an 'H', and that I'm the first one to comment

Thanks britease, please write more like this one.

Dogleg

I just found this story although it's two years old. The good thing about this site is that there is so much here, you're always stumbling across really good stories, sometimes from writers you follow regularly. Britease is a very good writer and, with the exception of the sexual element this is a good suspense, action piece that could have run anywhere. The romance if you want to call it that between Lisa and her interrogator is a bit of a stretch, but stranger things have happened. It's hard to envision a happy, romantic ending coming out of a tale of murder and torture, but this did it. Again, just an overall good story.

That was great - more?

Of course, unbelievable but we are in a fantasy world anyway. The relationship between could be a bit tense!

Sorry, but that is both ridiculous and offensive.

You never know what life will bring you............very erotic.

Sorry but this just didn't play well.

I enjoyed it but I felt that towards the end things moved it bit too fast

shit. Go ahead and say she's Wonder Woman. Good grief man. You are such an author of extremes. How do you write almost all fives or ones? WTF?

I am vet and air wing but many friends and family cover WW2 Korea and Vietnam

I won't say it is prevalent but happens talked to too many people who did it or saw it happen war breeds brutality

So I don't believe in women in combat unless they don't care about rape

Most of the story was reasonably OK, then it went to h…….. quickly.

Talk about being pushed off the cliff of whiplash and a totally disconnected rapid fire ending!!!!!

So what happened, somebody think they were going to run out of computer memory and decided to dump in the ending paragraph and screw the rest?

Sad when a story start to have some meat and merit, and then………..

Our 2nd attempt of trying one of your stories, and again it’s off to our chiropractor for whiplash!!!!

No stars for your weird sense of style and writing shortcomings.

You actually have that many followers???????

The escape seems not really realistic to me. It is good she gets away. And even get a lover before shooting him in the turmoil is great.

But it is a real pity that a young woman learns to kill before she has regular sex.

I enjoyed it