All Comments on 'Soldiers' Luck'

That is an absolutely fabulous first! Awesome job! I loved the blend of eroticism and romance.

I loved it.

I'll watch for more writings from you.

Nice, but ... things happen too quickly in the sex scenes. Slower with more detail would be better.

Also, "queue" means either "line" as waiting on a queue, or is a long pigtail as Chinese men used to weat. You mean "cue"

Great realistic story