All Comments on 'Solo Camping'

Hot story with characters well drawn. Proofreading would catch the little mistakes that distract...but doggone the story was FABULOUS!

Wonderful story, I look forward to reading more of your work.

This story is great. I can't believe how hot it got me.

Are you going to continue with what happens next? I would love to read about how he tries to pursue a relationship, and she wants it...but is difficult about it.

I love this story!

OMG how much did this just turn me on.

Story is excellent and very well written.

Thanks

Sorry too idealistic for me.. its not believable and a 9 inch cock Come On!

Too Idealistic needs to find a place in the woods ALONE. The story was great, please continue !!!

thanks for this wonderful story. made me all wet. more details on the analingus next time. like more details about how the insides of her ass tasted, etc.

fantastic story~

well written, great charecters, well spaced storyline drawing you in for more!! I look forward to more!!

Just called my realtor. "Find me a cabin in those woods".

Great story. Hope to find a next chapter before I leave to that awesome 'lonely' spot in the woods.

I only wish I was her!

I really enjoyed this story. It was very illusrative,well written, and very erotic.

I am an avid backpacker and hiker so it was especially enjoyable for me. I sure hope to read more from this author and until then I'll be keeping an eye out for some wood nymphs!

You weave an exciting tale, with excellent descriptions and hot action. Great fun to read. Don't we all visit here to read fantasy? Well you gave it to us, thanks!

Excellent story. A few minor grammatical errors, but otherwise very well-written. Liked how you didn't just go right into the sex, but built up to it. You really need to write some more stories.

Pretty good story, though it should be in non consent/ reluctance category since this is a rape story.

Well written, suspenseful, with a good end. Looking forward to more from this author. -aWandrer

This was so sexy! Very well written, I loved the build up to the sex. Made me all wet! :)

I loved every second of it. Bravo! That was exactly what I needed and I can't wait to read the second instalment!

Please continue. I really loved that story. The only thing though is you have Lisa say something and then immediately afterwards Nick says something. Sometimes i found it hard to work out who was saying what as they ran together in the same sentence. It took me quite some time to work out who was saying what. Despite that 100% to infinity and beyond!

this was the best story i read on this website , enjoyed it alot

When???

I'm sitting here, wet & waiting......

I read this story often... whenever I, ahem, need it. Please, please, please write more.

Continue!!

the best story I have read on Lit in a looooooooooooong time!! Please please please more!

this was a very hot story....

please finish

That was some hot shit doe

Damn. This really turned me on. I am craving getting fucked in the ass. Something I thought I would never say. I want to read more of this story.

That was a fucking amazing story... anxious to know how it ends!

The idea was great of course, and redheads are totally hot so I wanted to love this story but the poor writing skills just took me right out of the scene over and over. Tense changes from was to is and back again, sentence fragments... ugh. Sorry, but this needs a good editor to be a 5!

I did enjoy this story. I look forward to its conclusion.

Really enjoyed this story can't wait to read your next piece.

can't wait for more

May we have more????

I genuinely love your writing style! It’s depth was incredible the whole scene was so easy to visualise to the point that I could imagine the sun all over my skin, the gentle warm breeze with the sharp crispness of the water. This story was positively orgasmic from start to finish....all of the envy for that lucky girl. The characters were described so well that they took on a life of their own it was as easy as breathing to put myself in her role.

It’s so rare to find a story of this calibre, which ironically made me wonder “who are you?” Hand on heart a story like this deserves to be published to a wider audience.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)

Excellent, well written, erotic, romantic, not obscene at all. Lovely tale. Thanks.