by Cynthia W.
Loved it from start to finish cant wait to read more of your work
As much as I'm sad to see ti end I'm also very very pleased to see them get the happy anding they so deserved, and the fact that Isabel found her calling and meaning in life is beyond bliss. Her struggle fascinated me from the get-go far more than I ever thought possible, so seeing it resolved in such manner and with such care for a character made me really flutter inside each time Brandon doubted her feelings for him are even there.
Even though you only wrote it for five days you managed to breath in them the life other authors never achieve in months of polishing their stories, just goes to show the creative talent and sense in writing and character creation. The other excellent thing is the setting that was both (probably) life inspired just enough to be believable and the interaction of the said characters with the setting, the irish was the perfect fit here.
In the end all that's left is to give you a more than well deserved 5* and keeping my fingers crossed for a story of similar quality from you soon!
Are some of this boys gay.because am confused with a character called mark.i love ur story 5*****
When will the moderator re-release chapters 2-4? They are an essential part of a truly wonderful story and are in no way offensive or objectionable!
I enjoyed reading this story. Interesting plot and a warm romantic ending. You do good work. 5 stars all the way. Thank you.
A great ending to this story!
But I see that I will have to read it again, I have not been able to understand what really happened to Izzi. Maybe it's just that I'm wrong (I admit that I'm a person who wants to analyze everything) and that it's not important to know what happened to Izzi, that you just have to know that something happened to her without going further, but I feel that without this knowledge , History loses something important of its drama. Obviously, this is just my personal opinion.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
But please use an editor or a dictionary. E.g.: "someday" is not a word. "Some day" means "some time in the future" and definitely not the past. I think you actually meant "once" or "some time ago".
Your stories are definitely criminally underappreciated. Hope to read something else of yours soon!
Thank you for giving me the chance to read such a beautiful, heartfelt story. It helped me to get rid of the suicidal thoughts that were floating in my mind (no joke). Thank you for making a bad day bearable.
My eyes keep leaking, so l can't describe how good your writing is. Thank you!
I’ve read hundreds of stories on this site and Izzi, with her quiet deportment and dignity despite her massive self doubt, is one of my favorite characters on this site.
1 of the few i have read that bring tears to a man of 78+ yrs old. glad Brandon got through to her & helped her back to normal life .if i could it would be 5 times 10 for stars.