All Comments on 'Some Fresh Air'

That was a great story. Can’t wait to read the next chapter

Just wondering why they brought an .... electric cooker ... out in the woods

What's with all the he he an ha ha ? Nobody actually speaks like that. Also, why did they have all that gear to unload if they had a camper?

Very exciting xxx. Marie.

good read, a few mistakes but they could be overlooked because the overall story was so good as to hold your interest, hoping the next chapter will be as good and they will find happiness together

Please continue

Dad should have some chest hair -- for daughter to caress and taste, run her fingers through.

All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhibited sex.

Nice start. Very romantic. It would been a little hotter for me if she had been a little bustier but that's just my kink.

Five Stars!

Absolutely well written true love