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All Comments on 'Some Sexual Side Effects May Occur'

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ZachswifeZachswifeover 12 years ago

This is a great story idea, but I think the actual story needs some work. A little more detail, a little longer. Don't rush through it quite so fast.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start

This story has lots of potential. The ending needs work.

zoyiabzoyiabover 12 years ago
nice

I really liked the beginning of this story. too bad it wasn't a bit longer

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