All Comments on 'Something from Nothing Ch. 02'

Thank you for this story. It is a very welcome change of pace on this site. Well written and believable. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Even though she has decided not to hate him, it doesn't seem like her to just hop in the sack with him. She has resisted all efforts to be set up by her friends, doesn't go out of her way to meet guys. She doesn't know anything about him yet she's willing to get naked with a guy she doesn't really respect? And he just swoops into town and expects her to fall for him? No nice words, just hormones? Didn't seem right to me. Seemed like we missed the chapter where they came around to this. Even if there was copious internal dialogue instead of conversation, this would have made more sense. Although I'm not convinced this chapter was true to the characters, I still kinda liked it and will read the next chapter.

Please continue the story. It's great.

should be erotic couplings, not romance.

I've read this on Literotica before.. except it was finished and written about a year before you published it. Fail.