All Comments on 'Something in the Water Ch. 02'

That was a great chapter. Warmly thrilling! The couple develops Jackie's feminization in a natural way without over control on Jen's part. And they sexily make love together. Keep up the good writing.

Really loving this story!

Let go your imagination and please do other chapters on that storie.

Great writing....pls keep it up. However, you would sure make me even happier if you made each chapter longer!

I have many ways to advance this story. Maybe I'll do the final chapter down the road in several different versions. Not sure yet.

I like where the story is going, but with 3 chapters left I hope the chapters get longer and this isn’t a rushed story.