by michie
Thankyou, for a terrible minute I thought she wasn't going to give her son her panties.
Well written.
“I'm not a trained writer and my background is not in the arts,”
you say in your biography. (. . . and I'm really trying
to be rational and level-headed) . . . and I’m kinda speechless
tension in my jaw making movements, slight
movements as I search for words, michie
writers of your artistic skill are rare
here on literotica. Actually, with my
degree, a double major in English Lit
and philosophy, I edited
a lot of business material and
the best, those needing the least editing
where the engineers . . .
believe it, or not!
Fuck me, michie, this story
had me spellbound . . .
artistically tight-woven
aware and well-rounded
I forgot about my own penis as
I leaned in towards the screen
entranced with what I was reading
living entirely in the world you create here . . .
[And if it weren’t so late, and I wasn’t so tired, I'd leave a more lucid description of why your talent is as well-exemplified here as to compare favorably with the works produced by those trained writers with background in the arts. You do know, of course that William Shakespeare was not a trained writer and neither was Jane Austen. And even the best writers have editors tying up the loose ends before publication—but the art is the authors.]
Such a beautiful and caring mother. Masterfully crafted from the beginning to end. All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love.
In genre that is almost always unbelievable, you did very well, very well indeed.
I always love a good mom/son panty story and this one didn't disappoint. I hope there is a part 2 cumming soon.
and please don't take any notice of anonymous idiots, sadly we all attract one of two!
Beautifully crafted. Can't wait to read more. This deserves to be in the hall of fame.
So well written! I can not wait to read more about this affair! Would love to maybe see the daughter and or father involved with it somehow too
Very well done. Many moms have been in this exact situation. Some chose to ignore it as a passing phase, others confront and discipline, some chose counseling. This story is very realistic and captures the real emotions.
Not my usual taste, but it was well written. I think it was much more realistic, and somewhat "normal." That's what made it stand out as great for me. Thank you.
Sorry
Although well written this was one of the most ineffectual stories i have ever read. Absolute crap
A very tender story.
Many boys have fantasies about their Mother. You did a beautiful job addressing the feelings a young boy has about a lovely Mother that has always been very close to him.
Hope you take the story to another level.
Nice story, well written. My writings tend to spill over into a more graphic porn story. However, you're a good writer and the story was very interesting. Loved it.
Too short on real life. Just to much trivial detail. Too many words for nothing!
It never ceases to amaze me how someone who is unfortunate enough to be devoid of any sense of literary merit will invariably make a comment similar to an Anonymous here who wrote “Absolute crap” when confronted by a sensitively written story.
With an insecure husband and an adoring son I think I see what is coming and it won't be good for the family. Seems like mom and dad have more problems than they realize. If you take my advice you will not continue this story. Some things are better left to the imagination.
I expect that readers looking for cheap thrills and explicit sex without regard for the characters of the story will disagree. Thank you for a well-written and finely crafted tale.
Thanks to everyone who read. And those that commented too. This was, by far, my most positively received submission :)
Male here, love your story. Fuck the critics. As a panty wearing horn dog, I was dripping precum before the end. Thanks for keeping it up.
I have been reading stories posted here since last 7 years...Must accept this is one of the very well crafted story with a fine context....You have done a wonderful job in building up the sensual content...It seems real.
Rated this story 5 star. Please continue this story...want to see where your pen takes us....
Her husband should have responded “what do expect, you are beautiful sexy woman, any man would want you!”
Her responses was warm, loving and very sexy!! He is a lucky son!
Keep up the work!!
My friend mom took advantage of me, I am still grateful!! #thank you rather then #me too
Filled with emotion and love. The husband's antics even played well with the story. Wish I could give more than 5 stars.
I really enjoyed reading this! I feel like I got to know both you and your son after reading this. Look forward to reading part 2!
It is so easy to get this kind of situation wrong, Momma did good!! Dad, not so good! If a young man gets into this kind of state a father's understanding can resolve it so much better than a mother's However, father was not grownup enough to handle this. Well written, seems like potential for more. 4**** but worth much more in a way not relevant to mere stars!
I enjoyed your thought process, before, during and after, Michie. Your introduction was right, the sex part is almost ancillary to the whole of the story. Thank you for sharing.
That is brilliant how sensitive and erotic that is one of the best stories I have ever read on here and I found it by accident.
Thoroughly enjoyed this tale. It could have gone so many directions, but you chose wisely. Nice.
Well....a lot of psycological analysis, a lot of planning about a sensible approach to not hurt her son and...she gave him an handjob. Lol. She was outraged with her husband but, at the very end, he was right in his fears. Let me say that after talking and talking and talking she managed the problem at hand in a very poor way. I had to say this. But the story was well written and since it's about incest what happened had to happen.
The mother is just being a wife and mother not realising that her 19 year old son is attracted to her. When she finds out what happened to her missing underwear she's confused and tries to get support and advice from her husband. He's not strong and self confident enough to deal with it and the situation goes out of control. The dumbest comment he makes is to tell her that their son wants to fuck her. At that moment her husband said what she didn't dare to think. But since it was in the open she accepts the meaning of it and enjoys as a woman the sexual attention of a younger man. It shows that her husband had taken her for granted too long and failed to make her feel special. Clearly the relationship between husband and wife wasn't as good as they both thought. Trying to re-establish the connection between herself and her son she sends her husband away and meet her son, while knowing that he loves her but wants to fuck her as well. Considering all she actually did well. Her relationship between her son and herself is repaired however their is a new element of lust between the mother and son.
These seemed like real people. That's a rare thing on this site. And it was hot.
I like the way you write and you have a very vivid imagination, but I really do not like incest stories.
The forbidden attraction of her son towards her shakes up the family. Her husband acting like a toddler. Her son admitting his love and lust for her. And herself looking at herself again realising that she's still attractive. Looking at her son as a young man now. How her underwear rocked the family and her until now boring life. The kid has her full attention now.