All Comments on 'Something's Aren't Taught in School'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
"Something's"

Something's...? Really?

That's all I bothered to read.

I_Enjoy_Your_StoriesI_Enjoy_Your_Storiesalmost 9 years ago
wow another amazing story!

You are very talented. I love how you get to the sex without all the drivel that bores me. You writing gives me thrills and I appreciate you for it. Please write more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Anon missed out.

Yeah, there's a grammatical error in the title, and a few throughout. You would benefit from a good editor. However, this was hot hot hot, and like another reviewer said I love that you got straight to the point, and somehow without it feeling rushed. Love the reveal at the end, it pushed me over the edge!

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
Too Obvious

English wasn't taught in your school. Something's is Wrong. Somethings don't need apostrophes. Something's means it belongs to Something. Somethings are more than one thing. The s without an apostrophe tells me you mean more than one thing and the title should be (quote) "Some things aren't taught in school" (unquote).

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