All Comments on 'Sometimes, Things Just Happen'

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irishcream44irishcream44over 6 years ago
5 *

Maybe "you" could make it up to her son. Somehow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fun story

Quite a few older women like to tease son's friends. A bit of cleavage and "accidental" upskirts gets young guys aroused. It is thrilling and empowering for 40 or 50 something mom to know she turns guys on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

It’s all fun until you find out she’s been been fucked by your friend . I know a couple of guys that have fucked other people we knew mother. It’s fucked upon because he’ll be telling a group of us how he fucks her ass and makes her beg for his young cock then the son walks in the room and everyone starts laughing. Then someone would make up a joke to make him think they weren’t talking about him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
some things just happen

Good story, but as always there's just too much puritan guilt.

The's a scene in LOVE, ACTUALLY where the PM gets caught on stage. There's only one thing to do, Smile and wave!

trigudistrigudisover 6 years agoAuthor
Sue Pine is a former classmate of mine...

Sorry, I couldn't resist. Look, I enjoyed reading this. You write very well, with well-placed adjectives and a smooth, creamy flow. I'll be perusing more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more?

Will there be a chapter 2?

trigudistrigudisover 6 years agoAuthor
A follow up is in the works!

I couldn't just leave it, not with all the potential conflict swirling around these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Like it

New chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Moreeeeee

Great story. Let me know when there is a follow up on this story

trigudistrigudisabout 6 years agoAuthor
To anonymous

Thanks for your kind words. "Magnanimous" is the follow-up, published 1/12/18 in the Mature section.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Nice Read***

Would like to have had more to the ending of the story. Thanks for sharing.

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...