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All Comments on 'Son Gives Mom a Special Hug Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pretty Good

Don't leave us hanging right there. I think your chapters need to be at least two pages maybe more. Very good reading so far.

flyrsflyrsabout 6 years ago
Nice Follow Up

I read both your stories and I think you are improving a bunch. I really like that you are adding more dialogue. I felt like that was the big thing your first chapter was missing to flesh out the story. I am excited to see where this goes.

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
Short, but moves the action

Can't wait for the next chapter

Solomons_SongSolomons_Songabout 6 years ago
You're getting there

People complain that this was too short. I kind of like the idea of leaving me in suspense. Excellent first effort on a story.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 3 years ago

Strong follow up chapter and a major tease! Thankfully I don’t have to wait for chapter 3

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