All Comments on 'Son of Santa'

by johnbrown65

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 7 years ago
Kind of heartwarming

But a little sad for Santa

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Santa Will Be Fine! He'll Be Very Fine!

OMG! I'm ruined! I'll never be able to think of Mrs Claus as some old Lady ever again! I love it! As for Santa....you think he doesn't notice the female elves that work for him? I would venture to say that there are a few really beautiful cute sexy elves who'd give anything to lick Santa's Candy Cane! Who could resist Santa's many charms??? His bed will NOT be empty for long! And so many elves to pick from! He's probably happy as a clam!

Squire3Squire3over 7 years ago
Santa

My, my, what an interesting story line. Imaginative and erotic.

johnbrown65johnbrown65over 7 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thank you all for your kind words and votes. If you haven't yet, please vote and give a good rating if you like it. Constructive criticism is also always welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very good

It is very creative, very good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice creative ending -

This was a very nice story with a good twist at the end. This Santa is more understanding, which raises the story from a one-sided character. I feel sorry for all of the characters since the only reason they are together is due to self-confessed Santa's workaholic nature. His mission appears to be the reason everyone wins.

Bravo and thanks for keeping the setting real in the Twin Cities!

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

Interesting take but I'm little confused about something how is a elf when he is over 6 feet tall that is a little too far fetched for my taste either way still a interesting take

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19813 months ago

Interesting however Santa and mrs clause wasn't a elf they were in fact human who had magical powers if you go by the stories but in none of them was they ever an elf so you calling them that in hopes of making people believe it and trying to make yourself look smart on the current subject just makes you look like a idiot by the fact of showing no common sense

LadyLoreLadyLoreabout 1 month ago

Santa and Mrs clause wasn't a elf you really need research some more on what an elf is before you start writing about them and calling people an elf who clearly isn't a elf that just makes you look like a moron.

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