All Comments on 'Sonia's Weekend Break Ch. 04'

I think your story is well written but I don't see the need to reed the same for the 3rd time with just a few differences from the male point of view. Suggest you take it one step further, like Sonia more or less suggested, and continue with what eventually happened to Fiona. In her own story she said to be OK but Sonia, knowing her friend so well, implied that deep down Fiona too was longing for a stable, loving and lasting relationship. Maybe they can hook up together as one family. It has happened before. G.Belgium

I agree that the story should continue with Fiona's life hence forth. As it does with "Be careful what you wish for" which tells of what happens to her soon afterwards and travels down a darker and more sinister path. I definitely want to find out what happens next.