by KatKliffe
I AM BEGGING YOU. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. IF THERE IS ANY STORY ON HERE THAT NEEDS TO CONTINUE, ITS THIS. PLEASE CONTINUE AND POST 2ND PART AS SOON AS YOU CAN.
Please continue this masterpiece and post a second part as soon as you can.
Great chapter. A young woman falls for a quiet boy and younger than her, although not much younger (six years are nothing from the twenties). A relatively slow advance, she has a crush on him, and then a secret to be revealed ... And you cut the chapter here !!!
If you intended to keep the interest of the readers, damn you that you got it!
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
I know this is going to be a great story. Sam is a character I can really identify with. I give you a 5* just for the anticipation!!!!!!
A nicely constructed and well-written little story so far. I also liked the occasional humourous side journeys such as the hairy-backed client.
Kat, I note from your biog note that you list a Fetish as 'Gentle Femdom'. Interesting. I'm not into domination of any kind, but I do like the idea of a young woman who knows her own mind and is prepared to work to get what she wants. Your Dani seems to be such a person.
I look forward to where you take your story from here.
Lue
Ps: It would be interesting if you could tell a little more about yourself in your biog. When a new author writes a story like yours, I find it helpful to know more about the author.
Can't wait to see how this develops and the plans you have for your characters.
I love how you're putting this story together of a young woman meeting an innocent, naive, young man and showing him the world of romance. You're an outstanding story-teller. Your nuances of dialogue are unsurpassed! Thank you.
A different approach to seduction,
with a bit or role reversal. All of us
were virgins at one point and I find
these characters quite endearing,
bringing me decades in the past
to my "first"...
I hope more tasty morsels will appear
soon. Kudos to the authoress.