All Comments on 'Sophie's First'

Gripped from beginning to end, great piece of writing, hope you do more!!

If this is your first story, I can't wait to read the next installment!

Excellent start ... more please!

russ, that's a fantastic story.

it's very imaginative & nicely descriptive. there are lots of juicy bits in ur story, great reading.

well done hun

*mrs K*

Getting that first story "out there" is an achievement in it's own right, and yours was also a sizzler. Well done and hope to see more from you.