All Comments on 'Sorority Ch. 12'

I hope you continue! I really want to know if Dawson will fuck her professor.

I hope you come back to this. It's a very hot series, and there are a lot of plot threads left to be tied up.

this was hot- more chapters please!

It's not wrapped up yet! At least come back one more time and finish it! Please?

Please continue!!!!!!!

Did the maker die or get bored or somthing?

Very entertaining, but in the last couple of chapters it looks like all editing and proofreading went out the window. Right at the end there.. "She walked out with what little [ride she had left". You also referred to some of the girls with the masculine gender numerous times... and there were some continuity errors earlier on that don't jump back right to mind. Oh, here's one... Allison was described as having both blue and green eyes.

Another commenter mentioned that there were so many characters it was hard to keep them all straight. I don't think that was helped any by having so many similar names... Allison and Allie, Kate and Katie, etc.

That said, you clearly have a good imagination, and can come up with a great story. Would really be nice to see a little more polish and care being put into the final product, though. The first several chapters were not too bad at all... much better than the average of what's seen on this site, but it really started to fall apart by the end.