by MissRoberta
This chapter took a drastic turn from the last one. It looked like Jess might have a girlfriend as well as a pet. now we see a budding romance. I guess as the writer you were tired of these characters and just wanted to let go, and that is perfectly fine to do. The story over all was a great story even though I thought this last chapter was a let down. I enjoy your writing and wikk read more as you give us that honor to do so
I think the story was good overall. I feel an angle of Aubrey and Madison could be explored. Aubrey could have come back upset, Madison inquires, confesses her feelings and shows Aubrey how special she is to her. Jess got her girl, so that is the main focus. I just felt Aubrey and Madison both missed out on an opportunity to blossom.
I loved these chapters, and would love to se them continue. Like to see what happens at or after Jess' graduation. Also, since Jess is from a powerful family, would like to see any ramafications from her family. Another thing is how Mrs. Walker would feel about Sienna being gay.