All Comments on 'Sorority Girls From Hell'

This story is (a) unbelievable and (b) poorly written. In addition to spelling errors and faulty grammar, it just lurches from one moment to the next. I'd suggest trying it again after some closer editing.

two killer ooopses:

1. ...forced to climb 10 "stares" . were they angry stares? happy stares?

2. ...crawl in a hold. well, at least it wasn't "wholed" . was it a whole hole?