All Comments on 'Sorrow's Sieve Ch. 08'

Another great chapter! The development of Peter and Ada's relationship is, as always, pleasant and this time particularly sexy. Your writing flows, moving the story along at a wonderful pace, and the only complaint I have is most likely expected: a cliffhanger?! [Insert unintelligable cry of frustration here]

I am not dissatisfied, mind you. You've built the tension marvelously, and it was an incredibly well-crafted way to end the chapter. I'm merely frustrated that I can't travel forward in time to when the next chapter is out, so I can read that too.

As always, you've made a wonderfully well done story. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I eagerly await the next chapter.

I really like the idea of this story and would like to see where it goes. Except for that rapist subplot. It kinda feels overly cliched and done a thousand times, and it seems rather unneccessary to the story.

But I'll be following this and am really interested in how it will continue.