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Click here"You mean that, Jack?"
"Yes, I do, Jasmine. If it took all of this, just to get back into your arms again, it was all worth it. I love you baby."
"I love you, too."
"Are you crying?"
"Oh, shut the hell up and just fuck me."
"Yes, ma'am. Oh, shouldn't we stop the recording."
"Why not? Leave them wanting more. That is my philosophy."
"Since when?"
"Shut up, Jack."
"Well, this is the end of the journey. For now, at least. Hope to hear from you again so......Hey!"
"Sorry. Taking too long. Bye, guys. Been a blast. Bye!"
"I wanted to say........"
End of transmission.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI love stories like this but its just that I hate when daddies join the fun its like they can't find pussy to fuck aside from their daughters.
Oleguyover 10 years agoYou are to be congratulated for the novel approach of 5 (I think) conversations all at once.
I would like to see the no submission 'anonymouses' do half as well.
In other words put your money where your mouth and keyboards are.
Newwriter2012over 10 years agoAuthorI really think people misunderstand this series. Let me explain for those who are still confused.
Jack and Jasmine are soul mates; that is why I ended 3 the way I did. I wrote this as a trilogy. In the first part, you introduce the main characters and what the overall story will be about. In the second one, you create a problem that needs to be solved. In this case, that lies in the character of Jade. Jade is an insecure woman who is also jealous of Jasmine. It is through the love of Jack and Jasmine that she is able to love herself and open herself up a bit.
By ending the second one with a cliffhanger, I created the second problem: the parents finding out. In writing the third one, in two parts no less, I solve this problem of having the siblings seducing their parents, and by that, having Jack and Jasmine back together again, this time with their parent's approval. By the end of the story, the soul mates are reunited, thus bringing the story full circle.
So, while I can understand being upset with the story, in the end, the two are soul mates, and I ended the story the way I began it: with them together, in each other's arms.
