All Comments on 'South of Eden, North of Hell'

A very good idea.

Suffering from poor writers. Gave it 3*s. Keep trying.

AMerryMan

some very bad writing. You need to get a dictionary and learn to spell. The home was adjacent to the canal not 'adjutant'. And temptation is not spelled 'tempetation'. Those are just a couple of the more egregious errors I remember. All the mistakes ruined what could have been a good story. Both the writer and the editor are trying to use big words to make themselves seem erudite but actually make them look uneducated. If you want to write more, get an editor that knows what he or she is doing.

I considered this a story with a well thought out plot, the story took many unexpected turns with a just ending.