All Comments on 'Southern Hospitality Ch. 02'

Oh my god, I fucking love you. This is turning out to be one of my all-time favorites here on Literotica. I like what you've done with the mother, addressing her obviously knowing about the plot with the laptop as she obviously knew what Laura did for a living, but still leaving it open for some mystery behind it. Maybe she knew Laura had a thing for him and wanted to fuck him but instead thought he hooked up with her niece while Laura took some vicarious pleasure through that? Maybe she knew Laura would seduce him and thought it would be good for her son to loose his virginity but didn't know about Laura's extra "equipment"? Or maybe she knew it all and still approved (either including or not including her also wanting to seduce her son with or without a "tool" of her own)?

It's fun to speculate like this and I like that you are really focusing on both story and sex scenes and I just love both so much. Thank you for this story and I really really hope you'll continue with more soon (and hopefully finish it someday as well, though no rush on that front).

thank you for your writing

This is great. You found a good balance between narrative and sex, I absolutely love the characters, especially Laura ;-)

My only criticism is that the title is "Southern Hospitality" and there's very little to suggest that Laura is southern. Maybe add some discriptive text in future chapters describing her accent? Or maybe have her favorite meal be biscuits and gravy, or fried chicken and cornbread..... or have her drive a classic car, such as a 69 Dodge Charger, lol.

Either way, I look forward to the next chapter!

Masterfully told to bring characters to life. Makes me want to be part of story

Absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Just keep them coming, please.

I really love it, and I want more!

Great story as usual :)

would be hilarious if it turned out his mom wasnt really his mom but his dad and the neighbor her niece and his "mom" all 3 gangbanged him

Great balance, timing, development and anticipation in this two part story. Clearly you're onto something. Hope it continues!!

From the start of the first chapter to the end of the second I am completely entranced by this story! Hope to see it continued

This is my first sample of your writing, and I'm enamored. Yes; there are a few typos scattered about, but nothing to fret over. More importantly, you're good at building things and making the reader speculate before the reveal. I dig it.

Onward!

Please let him meet her niece so they can hook up.

You are such a gifted writer. Great story line. Lots of interesting paths to take. The introduction of the niece but maybe Laura really wants him. Is she too old for him? And the sex is so passionate. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Love your stories just re-read this one can't wait for more or to meet the niece also your rite of passage series I am definitely jealous of your characters would love to be in both the boys positions

Well written and some hot action. Seriously though, Ch. 3, maybe 4 is required as well.

Keep up the good work!

Some well witten Hot action

I am enjoying the story and dreaming about a shemale helping me find my feminine side

Where is there a Laura around here?

Very well written, excellent details and a smooth plot. Well done!

love it

It just keeps getting better

You made the femboy so freaking adorable and thicc, he's now even hotter than Laura! I'm surprised guys haven't asked him out yet, sounds incredible that haven't happened!

Very well written

I love the story, going to read chap 3. Bravo!