All Comments on 'Southern Tide Vol. 01'

You continuously use words that contain "brassiere" in it that don't refer to a bra... Those aren't real words. Is that the norm somewhere? I don't get it. I've read this story before as Catherine! I enjoyed it before and I enjoy the rewrite immenesely, but the brassiere thing was distracting enough for me to comment.

That can happen if you tell your computer to replace every 'bra' with the word brassiere.

I apologize. I hadnt epected the spell check to alter the words so drastically. I had various edited copies of this story and hadnt realized the errors. Uploading a better copy now.

I love this story n I wish there was a part two... the Brain n Kiara

From start to finish, excellent!

Thank you for reposting this story, I loved it even more this time around!

lovely story

JUST LOVELY

I absolutely love this story! I really hope to soon see a sequel to this novel!!

I cant express how happy your story made me!!! Bravo!!!!!

Loved it! !!!!!

Good story, really good character development and a really nice flow everything you want in a good story

Ughh love it forever alone

Very nice story and well developed.

I wonder what taken with Brian and kiara

Beautiful story. I love BBW stories!!!!

This was really quite good.

The story was excellent. Your character development was really well done, considering it's only a few pages.

You could probably write a pretty good story that didn't involve sex. But, that doesn't mean you should stop writing hot stories like this one.

Five stars!

Brilliant! Loved Dale.

Cat was every&any woman. Loved it!

Ps: Carol, whats her story?

Part4. Ki and Brian

I stumbled on your stories, and I'm glad I did ! You are a great storyteller. Looking forward to more.

Which is it?

The writing quality is good. But I hated this story, because Cat is a filthy hypocrite. On one hand whining about how guys don't like her instead of hot girls... yet she only goes for hot guys and the first thing she cares about Dale is his good looks. Made an otherwise good story totally sour for me.