All Comments on 'Souvenir of Budapest'

..with the principal character brutalized in the same fashion without ANY of what might be regarded as more interesting pathways chosen than merely fumbling about in fear of discovery or repetition of the underlying trauma. Not just white hot anger - how can children be left with this person, especially as they get older? This is a class A trauma, he'll be as fully loaded for PTSD and all of its symptoms as any combat vet or any other rape victims. Maybe he becomes obsessed with those who tortured him. There is a smorgasbord of possibilities. Surely, even your word processor must groan when you turn once again to...gosh, I wonder what you call the basic draft you endlessly - but only slightly - amend.

it is a horrible evil crime. EVERY story you have these faggot looking straight men overpowerec by some large fat cow. Its absurd.

You are mentally disturbed. This isnt sexy or hot or erotic.

I have written the folks that run LIT and i have asked them many times to report YOU to the police and FBI

A bowl of raisin bran will shred up your gums stay away from raisin bran cereal it hurts

I found the story ok, it certainly didn't arouse me but that is no reason to be cruel to the writer. Everyone is turned on by different things and if you don't like than don't read it. You Should never call people sick or whatever because you don't like their fantasy, that is just small minded and lame. Good luck Ed, keeping writing what makes you happy and forget all the mean comments, it is an intriguing story even if it is not my idea of sexy.

When he went into the bathroom with the fat lady, why not swing his hand into her throat? I guarantee yo u see lets go and either falls to the floor struggling to breath or falls to the floor dead with a crushed larynx. Failing that, when he got home there's no way he stays married to the bitch. A lawyer gets him custody and maybe her deported. Another awful Edrider story in which the man never fights back and there are no consequences for the woman. Total garbage.

sorry I would have destroyed magda possibly but cutting her into quarters while she was alive, she is cruel sadistic whore, enough said, The video was done without permission, suits would follow as would criminal charges.

Whats your demon?? Are you an ugly old bag or are you a real faggot??

I'm sorry I didn't know what I was getting into. This is a brutal story that has no suitable ending ... I'm outta here !!!

He should of said the hell with it and just divorced her. What's she going to do next, turn him into a eunuch?

He went to therapy for a year? With her? For a YEAR?! To save THAT marriage?!

Ed, I like your stories, I keep coming back. Your writing is real enough for me to get invested in the characters and the story.

But this ending is ridiculous.