All Comments on 'Space Exploitation Ch. 02'

Not bad, small thing I noticed: it should be Cheng not Chang, it's a combination of the words Chief Engineer.

As an FYI for you: ChEng is in-fact pronounced 'CHANG' in this man's Navy.

I really like this story's so far.

A great read looking forward to more.

Yes, it should be Chang, I think originally I spelled it two different ways, and my editor (who doesn't have navy experience) picked one. Same as me spelling Gonzales 4 different ways (checks notes to see if I spelled it right-nope, fuck!).

I think I'm going to pull the first two chapters to fix a lot of stupid mistakes and the formatting and re-submit, sorry to everyone for your comments going away, but I'd rather have the story be more readable.

Also, I write a lot, but editing is the "bottleneck," so if anyone would be willing to proofread my work I could get a lot more posted...

Thanks,

Aaron

I really have to start checking the submission dates of the stories I start...so you haven´t submitted any other chapters for this story, do you plan on continuing the story? Are you laying your work out on another site? Thanks for you time on this one, do wish for you to continue...

would like to hear about the new planet