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by ufpe

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
it needs a lot of work

it needs a lot of work to correct the spelling and grammar errors, and more work to format it so that it is a better read ... as for the plot ... it looks liike he wrote this right after watching the movie "Life Force"

cutupcutupover 10 years ago
please continue

Its wonderful and only needs minor edits I hope you will make more chapters

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