by sporgasbored
Thats some fucked up shit bro sorry didn't do much for me..cheers for in depth and innovation and progressional kinky transatlanticism though!
I don't know who you're writing for, but I left the story after a supposedly experience trooper left her rifle behind to follow an odor. This is the action of a newbie who won't make it through her first engagement. Your concept isn't bad but you're writing in an area that you don't know about. Learn something about soldiers and combat or choose a different area for your writing skills.
Cinematically potent pheromones, Francis. It's sci-fi wank fiction, not Stephen Ambrose.
I love it and plan to read the entire series
Wow, found you by accident and going to read the entire series... what a start, i sure hope the rest is as good as this chapter... thank you