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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Better theme

Non-marital is an easier theme to be accepted in. And easier to write becasue there is less complexity. Your other story about cheating wife and husband lacked any credibility - it also didn't garner you any respect as an author when you said no one was hurt.

Stay away from marital cheating unless it is real to life's complexities which usually means consequence. Not easy to realistically portray all emotions and circumstances. To really lose respect try cuckolding for the jaded sick one's. Theres a way to really lower audience appreciation and author respect!

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