All Comments on 'Spanking Little Sister Ch. 02'

It was so good but I need more and get to the sex soon if you can

The first chapter he picked her up at the hotel where she spent a drumk night with two dudes. She rven related finding empty comfom wrappers on the floor the next morning? Now you say he broke her hymen with his fingers in a S&M session?

Dude, can you say editor?

I said dude.

I'm not entirely sure what it was that Lee2012 was reading before my submission was stumbled upon but I'm sure if they were to go back and read the first chapter they would realize they got mixed up. No drunken trusts with two men in hotel rooms to be seen here~ <3

This need a ch. 3 maybe even a ch. 4. cant wait for the next chapter.

I love this so much!!!!!! Can't wait for more

and I hope this is getting to the romance between siblings...truly erotic

What an exciting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I am as hard as Jason.

Good story. A little too violent for my tastes but what the hell. It is fiction. Lee 2012 or whatever the fuck your name is, are you drunk commenting or what. There is no hotel in this story. I love the part where they go to the zoo and she is fucking the bearded lady...... what a maroon.

He is a nerd virgin but: (1) recognises something in her eyes and (2) finds everything between her legs immediately and knows exactly what he is doing with his hand. No matter how much porn he has watched this is too unlikely.

A shame because you write well. Be prepared to write a longer build up so you can keep it real.

Please write more. How do I contact you direct?

Robbie.

I would love a Ch. 3

nice i would recommend ...more!

This is fucking hot, and your writing is really good. I'm dying for the next chapter!

This story is just amazing so far!!!

Please finish it.

Oh another hot abandoned story. Wow

Amazing story, but I really need more :(

Another hot abandoned story. Really would like to have you finish your story.

He spanks her again as punishment for ignoring the grounding. Than finger fucks her till she cums and has her first orgasm.

Decent but one major flaw that made my eyes nearly roll out of my skull with how annoying it is to have story after story ruined by inaccurate bull: The hymen is not a barrier that breaks..... Virginity is not about tearing the hymen, hell, a lot of women aren't even born with them at all.