All Comments on 'Spanking My Sexy Stepdaughter'

by mrsterygor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So hot

Omg so fucking sucking hot, and a squirter too, I just adore cunt juice, especially getting drunk on it while sucking and fucking. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

mrsterygormrsterygorover 7 years agoAuthor
Response to "So hot" comment

Thank you for the feedback and praise. I appreciate it. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed this story. I enjoy squirting and pussy juice as well. It's definitely fun to write about that in my stories.

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 7 years ago
Great story

Really enjoyed this tale, would love to see more of these characters. Please consider additional chapters.

5/5

mrsterygormrsterygorover 7 years agoAuthor
Response to "Great story" comment from TheKrakk

TheKrakk,

Thank you for the praise and feedback. I really do appreciate it.

I am certainly considering adding another chapter and making this into a series.

If this story receives enough praise and positive feedback, I will definitely

plan on writing a second chapter.

In the meantime, feel free to read the rest of the stories on my site and provide feedback on them as well.

Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
People just don't

No one seems to care about quakity... There are volunteer proof readers around...

mrsterygormrsterygorover 7 years agoAuthor
Response to "People just don't" comment

Care to elaborate on your comment?

As the author, I have no issue with listening to and responding to constructive criticism.

When you question the quality of a story but spell "quality" like "quakity" then it becomes very difficult to take a comment into consideration.

Just something to keep in mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

More chapters, more spanking. Five stars!

mrsterygormrsterygorover 7 years agoAuthor
Response to "More" comment

Thank you for the positive review and 5 star rating. I do appreciate it.

It's great to hear that you enjoyed this story.

I am definitely going to consider adding another chapter

and making this into a series.

Hopefully, my work can continue to entertain and arouse my readers.

Biguy46Biguy46over 7 years ago
Cheerleaders

Excellent story I love cheerleaders more please!!!!!!!!

mrsterygormrsterygorover 7 years agoAuthor
Response to "Cheerleaders" comment from Biguy46

Thank you for the positive feedback, Biguy46. I do appreciate it. I'm sure you already figured this out, but I'm a big fan of cheerleaders as well. I definitely have a lot of fun writing about them in erotic stories. And don't worry, I have no plans to stop writing and publishing erotic stories for my readers. There will definitely be more to come.

mezmerizedmezmerizedabout 6 years ago
Curious...

1) who was the guy, if he looked to be about 5 yrs older... 2) how did the bottoms already get stapled up, unless she was tramping around more than once... & 3) if he & mom, just got married 3 weeks before, how long have they been together, that she's already calling him daddy, and he's bitching about $ he spent on her cheer outfit? and at 6'1", in H.S., I can't imagine there's a whole lot of action her way, even if she is a knockout. I'm thinking that was a type-o

mrsterygormrsterygorabout 6 years agoAuthor
Reply to "Curious" by mezerized

1.) He's just a guy that Sara was having sex with. She is quite horny.

2.) The staples were already present and able to pressed back on to hold them together.

3.) Those thoughts are all something I will consider when writing future erotic stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
An amazon cheerleader

A small complaint that nagged at me when I started reading:

In my career, I've worked with a lot of athletes: gymnastics, cheerleading, basketball, etc. Six foot tall high school female cheerleaders aren't believable, unless this story takes place in Amsterdam. College and high school cheerleaders are typically 4'11" to 5'4", occasionally 5'6". Being nearly a foot taller than the rest of her squad, a 6'1" cheerleader wouldn't be able to integrate with her teammates in stunts or choreography. This has nothing to do with your story, and I get that this is fantasy. Sorry to nitpick.

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