All Comments on 'Spark the Inferno Ch. 01'

Very good start. Interested to see where this potential love affair heads from here. My opinion... deeply madly in love, raising their kids.

Pretty good story and first effort. I enjoyed it. I agree with the Anon comment that you need to continue and I also agree and am a sucker for happily ever after, madly in love raising their children. I look forward to read the next chapter(s)

Disappointing, the sex is just a dream, and if Nick didn't cum from the dream, he is definitely in need when he wakes up. He should certainly finish the job. Why didn't Jen return while he was doing so, - maybe finish him in her mouth? Maybe it can lead to what we all want.

Thank you, this may become a winner.

Pity that it is a little hard to read when sentences flow into one another, and some strange transitions from one action to the next.

Why did you stop?